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Old 12-24-2006, 02:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: 2nd attempt
Old 12-24-2006, 05:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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What do you need help with? The forum or would you like C&C? Personally I like number 2.

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Re: 2nd attempt
Old 12-24-2006, 06:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well, I think I have the posting issue resolved....now I just have to work on making my photos better ! Any help there would be appreciated !
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Re: 2nd attempt
Old 12-25-2006, 12:15 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I am just learning myself. I look forward to comments from our experienced members.
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Re: 2nd attempt
Old 12-29-2006, 12:19 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I will mention only one item, and perhaps some others will discuss posing, etc.

I get the feeling, especially in 1 & 2, too short a focal length was used, because the legs (and hands in 2) appear larger than they should.
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Re: 2nd attempt
Old 12-29-2006, 02:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Both #1 and #2 have sort of an odd look due to the disappearing leg. It just seems that the lower part of the leg is missing. Is the cloth folded around it, or what? In any event, it jumped out at me and made me think something was wrong with the photo. #2 puts too much emphasis on the hands. #3 is a nice clean portrait but try it with out the hand showing to see how that works. I think you've gone overboard on the framing. There is so much frame that it means the main picture is smaller than it should be.

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