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My first attemp at glamour photography
Old 12-09-2006, 02:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello everyone I am to the site and to Glamour photography and here are two photo from my first attemp.At the moment I only have one stobe flash and a softbox which is what I used for these shots. I would to hear your imput, tips and pointers. Thanks Tye




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Re: My first attemp at glamour photography
Old 12-09-2006, 02:58 PM   #2 (permalink)
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First, they are too large to view all at once on a 1024x768 resolution monitor which around half of us use. Max height for a photo in a post should be no more than 600 pixels high or about 750 pixels wide.

Both of the photos seem adequately lighted, but both have flawed composition and posing. The background is distracting and in the case of #2 has the door frame running up out of the back of her head. Since it is a white door frame it really calls attention to itself. The poses in both shots are a bit awkward.

When doing for first glamour shots, you'll be better off to get rid of complicated backgrounds and just shoot in a way that keeps the backgrounds from being the dominate force in the photo. Work on natural poses. Get some books and begin by copying some of the poses that you like best.

Also, you say three photos, but I only see two.

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Re: My first attemp at glamour photography
Old 12-09-2006, 05:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
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in the first photo the hot spots on her shoulder and forehead are distracting. And I would agree with RFS about the background. It's distracting and feels more like something you'd see on a porn site. Maybe move her over a bit and change your camera position so that either the door or the blue wall are the only things behind her.
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Re: My first attemp at glamour photography
Old 12-09-2006, 11:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Sorry about the large images.
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