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New Shoot - C & C Please?
Old 11-18-2006, 09:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey Guys,

Thanks for the last C & C. I now know how the forum works "slowly" with Critique, so i wll step back and just watch it trickle in!


Cheers guy, thanks for looking!







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Re: New Shoot - C & C Please?
Old 11-18-2006, 09:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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First....she is absolutely stunning. And all of the photos are top-notch. My ONLY gripe is that maybe in the first image, the kicker from her left side is a tad too strong. The shirt is slightly washed out a little on that side according to my monitor. Outside of that--perfecto!
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Re: New Shoot - C & C Please?
Old 11-18-2006, 10:28 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I took a look at this on my other notebook and it is not quite as bright on this monitor. Maybe they are ALL perfect after all?
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Re: New Shoot - C & C Please?
Old 11-19-2006, 05:01 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Beautiful girl, and with lottsa' personality. Exposures are really close to right on. I just wish......I could see the top of her head. of course, I have the same problem myself, alot.

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Re: New Shoot - C & C Please?
Old 11-19-2006, 12:09 PM   #5 (permalink)
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hot model with lots of personality and charisma that captures nicely! she seems very inclined to lean into the shots. would like to see some where she keeps her head and body upright. the last one seems a bit off color-wise.
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Re: New Shoot - C & C Please?
Old 11-19-2006, 02:50 PM   #6 (permalink)
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The third shot is my favorite. Mostly because of the light on her face.

In all of the other shots her left eye has a shadow that gives a bags under the eyes appearance. Unfortunately the feature that gives those great eyes kick is also a lighting problem. The tissue under the eyes is a little thinner than average and is more likely to catch a stray shadow.

Fortunately she is so lovely that only anal retentive photographer would notice
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Old 11-19-2006, 06:04 PM   #7 (permalink)
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TFortunately she is so lovely that only anal retentive photographer would notice
on the other hand, a few too many photographers have no sense of anal retentiveness whatsoever and don't seem to notice the obvious stuff (that ain't workin) in their viewfinders.
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on the other hand, a few too many photographers have no sense of anal retentiveness whatsoever and don't seem to notice the obvious stuff (that ain't workin) in their viewfinders.
Is that directed at me?

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Is that directed at me?

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absolutely not. i meant it as a general observation. i should have made that obvious.
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