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I guess it's time...
Old 11-17-2006, 02:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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to bite the bullet, stop lurking, and start posting...
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Re: I guess it's time...
Old 11-17-2006, 02:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
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#1 is much better than #2. It has a good sense of motion about it and is well posed. I think there is a little problem with fill as there is almost no detail in the hair in #2 and on the hair on the left on #2 (although this may just be my laptop monitor, I don't know). #2's pose is such that it makes the model look a little heavier, whereas #1 keeps her looking trim. Also the lightin in #2 or the position of the model does makes the chest look pretty featureless. Compare to #1 which has a great bust line due to good shadow ratios.



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Re: I guess it's time...
Old 11-17-2006, 05:09 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I echo the thoughts of #1 over #2. My initial thought in image #1 was 'great shot'...and in #2, my thoughts were that the 'shirt' stands out more than the model--probably only due to lighting....

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Old 11-17-2006, 06:00 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks guys! Appreciate your taking the time to critique.
I posted the second one mostly 'cause I liked the eyes - most models look at the camera, she looked INTO the camera. was very cool.
here's another:




I only had about 10 minutes with her (she showed up with another model), so I shot what I could and scheduled another shoot for her.

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Old 11-17-2006, 07:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
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George,

I like #1 and #3. If these are first (or thereabout) attempts, you're pretty good already!

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Old 11-17-2006, 11:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I like them all! But I agree 1 & 3 are the best. Nice work and nice model Keep posting.
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Old 11-18-2006, 03:29 PM   #7 (permalink)
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#1 has way more going for it and i'm not just talking about the motion. #2 seems overly processed and too flat. great model! she comes off very confident in the images.
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#1 is nice. It's the best of all three. Mr Smith had some right on comments, so I won't address them again. I would take #1 and use the liquify tool to pull in her tummy a little bit. Next time you shoot be conscious of that.

Overall, good work!

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Old 11-18-2006, 07:00 PM   #9 (permalink)
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#I would take #1 and use the liquify tool to pull in her tummy a little bit.
if only it were that easy when it comes to my own belly.
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What's wrong with her tummy? She looks fine. Leave it be and don't perpetuate unhealthy stereotypes.
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