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Old 11-04-2006, 11:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 11-04-2006, 11:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Someday I hope to be in your class. That is a great shot. The daylight/flash balance is right on. ( I hope thats the way you lit it.)
The only thing that I noticed is along her leg is a shadow of some sort. I would brush that a bit. Great model!

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Old 11-08-2006, 10:55 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It's a shadow. This is the raw file.I was playing with Nikons CLS. I thought I over lit it. It was proir to sunrise and the flash was set for bright overcast skys.

See! Even a blind monkey finds a banana every once in a while

Thanx for the compliment.
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Re: Oohhmmmmm!
Old 11-10-2006, 04:33 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I think you could have gotten in closer.
Also, you need some rim light to seperate her hair from the dark background
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Old 11-12-2006, 10:11 PM   #5 (permalink)
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the sunrise was to rise behind her in 10 minutes. The soft glow of the overcast skys at sunrise made for a better backdrop.

I can't stand rim lights even though the sun provided it for me a few minutes later. IMO I think it's a tired old trick that people use when they can't plan their shoots. I have complete distane for anything more than a key and reflectors. I don't mean to step on any toes with that but I like hard shadows and leaving it to the imaganation of the viewer. I also think some of the worst photography is the playboy lighting. Can't think on their feet so they just wash out the pic.

It's an outtake, I sold the rights so this is all I have. I still like the reflection on the water and the flower adds seperation.

To leave an implied in the photo provides tension.

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PS. The backdrop of the second pics is a peice of leather and my hand over the flash allowing a bit of light between my fingers.

Boy that was hot!
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