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Old 11-01-2006, 02:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Shab
Old 11-01-2006, 07:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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#'s 1, 2, & 3 she has the same expression and it gives me the impression that she's about ready to burst into tears. Also in each of these she is full frontal to the camera which is not a flattering angle. I'm sorry man but who's idea was it for those boots in an evening gown?

The last image shows real promise. Bump up the contrast a little and I think you've got a keeper.

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Old 11-01-2006, 08:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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In images #1, 2, 3 you may want to try from a little lower angle. That will give her a little longer, leaner look.




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Re: Shab
Old 11-02-2006, 01:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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On the positive for 1-3, you did a good job of keeping shadows off the wall--so that is a plus. I have to agree about the boots and expression though....fahsion/glamour is about selling...would love to see more expression within her.

I like the mirror image--good concept. I would spend a little more time playing with some angles and the mirror.

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Old 11-02-2006, 06:24 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the model, but #1-3 has a touch too much negative space and headroom IMO. A complimentary prop of some sort would help the negative space. A lower angle, as mentioned, could help with the headroom. Aside from that her skin tone is nice and really compliments the background.

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Old 11-02-2006, 09:45 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments.
Lots of my pictures have negative space on one side or another. It's a good idea about adding something there to fill that place.
I also noticed on a lot of my pictures the negative space on the top. I think I'm doing this so if I have to print, there is room to crop.
Don't even mention the boots, that drove me nuts too.
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