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Carrie from today's shoot
Old 09-28-2006, 08:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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These are a few quick edits from my shoot with Carrie today, any thoughts? (Yes she does smile, in fact she's got a great smile, I just haven't gotten to those yet)


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Re: Carrie from today's shoot
Old 09-28-2006, 10:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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All three have problems with dark eyes. Needed some fill, either by reflector or a flash to put some sparkle in the eyes. Cropping too tight at the top in all three shots in my view.



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Re: Carrie from today's shoot
Old 10-04-2006, 07:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree that all of them need some light in her eyes.

#1. When shooting horizontal you need to get her out of the center of the image. Remember the rule of thirds. The crop on top doesnt bother me much at all, however I would probably cropped it differently. Either tighter or left a bit of room. That is strictly a personal preference though.

#2. Definately needs some room above her head. Perhaps a slight levels adjustment.

#3. The stray hairs across her cheek are bothering me a bit. Crop doesnt bother me much in this one.

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A touch of fill flash or a bit of light off a reflector would have been nice. She's got a terrific face, eyes, and smile and I like the composition of each.
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