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Presenting KJ
Old 09-26-2006, 12:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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From a recent shoot with new local model KJ. This was her first time in front of the camera, and I look forward to working with her more in the coming few months.

Your C&C are appreciated and welcomed for both model and photographer.

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Re: Presenting KJ
Old 09-26-2006, 12:27 PM   #2 (permalink)
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She looks a little nervous but that is understandable due to this being her first shoot.
pic 1 is a little soft and the light is a little hot on her face and upper body. the pose is quite suggestive almost raunchy, i'm sill debating weather i like it or not.

pic 2 is better the number one i like the black and white. and the shadow definition adds nice features and brings out just how striking her face is. i feel that the shirt she has on is on the big side and makes her breasts disappear which i doubt was the desired effect. and on the light on the right had side of the pic there is none. a fill light for the side would have helped the stark contrast in the background.

pic 3 is cute although with that lean she has or the twist of the camera i feel as if i'm drunk (wish i was :0)

pic 4 is the best in my opinion and not just because she has on lingerie... ok it helps alot that she has on lingerie but she appears to be more comfortable. i would have cropped out more of the bottom have of the pic and just focused on her mid section up. her legs cut at mid thy is a little off in my opinion.

keep taking pics. and keep taking pics of her, she's a very attractive model.
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Re: Presenting KJ
Old 09-26-2006, 02:09 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks Jesse for taking time to post your comments. They are highly appreciated.

In the third (angled shot) she was just moving to some music I had playing, and I caught the shot. I don't think she was ready for it, but the result was one of the better from that set. As for the shirt, you are quite right that it's a little too big. She didn't have anything with a button front so I loaned her one of mine, and I'm a lot bigger than her size 1 .

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Re: Presenting KJ
Old 09-26-2006, 02:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I'm getting 4 shapely red X's here... I'll try to refresh and come back in.

Copy/paste of link to pics doesn't work either, "page cannot be displayed"

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Old 10-02-2006, 03:02 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i understand about the model not having all the wardrobe items that you have in mind. i like the girl and i like the pics, i'm sure when u shoot again u 2 will have more fun and more dynamic photos.
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yeah...what Jesse said....she is stunning as well.
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Old 10-02-2006, 07:24 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I like #2 the best. Good expression and layout.

My biggest issue would be use of too wide of a lens. These create unpleasant figure distortion and should be used sparingly, or with an obvious intent to distort. For example in #1 and #4 the model appears shorter and heavier than she really is.

In #2 & #3 the background fits, in # 1 & 4 it looks like a wrinkled sheet.

Have fun and shoot as much as you can.

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