Lens Diaries Go Now
Glamour, Beauty, Nude, Models, Photographers

*    |  Register  


 
Go Back   Garage Glamour™ > Garage Glamour™ Community Related Forumss > Photo Reviews & Critiques Only
 

Photo Reviews & Critiques Only Constructive & professional critiques only

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
A Shoot from Last week
Old 09-19-2006, 01:02 AM   #1 (permalink)
Free Member

 
infocusphoto's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Member GG#: 54100
Location: Cartersville
Posts: 2
Comments: 0

infocusphoto is offline IP: 68.19.5.107
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Well I will try to post this one larger.
Letme know what you think.
__________________
In[i]F[i]ocus Photography
David McLeod
  View Public Profile Send a private message to infocusphoto Find More Posts by infocusphoto
 
Re: A Shoot from Last week
Old 09-19-2006, 02:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
Free Member

 
R_Fredrick_Smith's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
Member GG#: 35872
Location: Dallas/Fort Worth Area
Posts: 3,660
Comments: 41

R_Fredrick_Smith is offline IP: 24.0.6.170
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Size is just fine. Just keep the size below 600 pixels high and you have the best chance of working on the most browsers.

You have very sharp details in the attractive fence, building and green plants. And the door frame growing out of the head is easy to see also.

In other words, look around at the area you're shooting in and find some place that does note have all these distractions as part of the background. Also be very careful with this type of pose because it often puts a crease in the skin as this one has which can be unsightly.


Cheers,
rfs
__________________

"The map is not the Territory"
  View Public Profile Send a private message to R_Fredrick_Smith Visit R_Fredrick_Smith's homepage! Find More Posts by R_Fredrick_Smith
 
Re: A Shoot from Last week
Old 09-19-2006, 11:03 AM   #3 (permalink)
Lifetime Photographer

 
mcherry's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Member GG#: 45854
Location: Stamford
Posts: 309
Comments: 0
Send a message via AIM to mcherry

mcherry is offline IP: 69.120.37.143
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

I'll echo the comment above and add that the highlight coming down the pole between the models leg probably doesn't need to be there....

The first thing you should do prior to shooting is establish your set. Once you have that set up how you want it (even if that just means figuring out what angle you want to shoot it at, or how you want to light it, what needs to be moved around, etc.) THEN you figure out how to best place the model in the set. This is true whether shooting in a studio or on location.

I came to this through film and video and still apply those same skills. Try to think of a photoshoot as a production and plan it accordingly. Unfortunately I'm not at a location where I can post an example of what I'm talking about, but I will try to remember to repost tonight with an example.

If the location I want to use is near me (say for example if this is your house) then spend a day photographing it and lighting it in different ways (adding a reflector, using a light with a cookie, trying out different times of day, etc) without a model. Experiment and see what works best. Then you'll have an idea of what your set possibilities are. Then once you have the "set" or location as you would want it, examine the photos and figure out how you would want the model positioned in it. By doing all of this you will go into the shoot knowing what you can use to your advantage and what you will have to watch out for.

In the photo you posted, had you moved the model a little further from the background and reduced your DOF it would have resulted in a more pleasing shot, then I would have Photoshopped out the pole sticking out of her head and reduced the highlight between her legs.

On the plus side she is a very attractive model and if you can keep working with her while you refine your skills you will have some beautiful images.

Best,

Matt
  View Public Profile Send a private message to mcherry Visit mcherry's homepage! Find More Posts by mcherry
 
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Trade for Prints/CD, what's fair? kgphoto Model Topics 57 01-19-2011 02:38 PM
Porn Shoot or Glamour Shoot? jimmyd Main Community Forum 8 05-31-2006 09:15 PM
Virgin Islands Shoot ended a week ago and I already miss it photoshooter Main Community Forum 10 05-16-2006 10:34 PM
Shoot from last week... BillD Photo Reviews & Critiques Only 2 02-27-2006 07:42 PM
Lingerie shoot next Week mgerdes Main Community Forum 5 02-18-2006 06:46 PM


New To Site? Need Help? Photographer & Model Links
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 12:09 PM.

© 1999-2017 Garage Glamour™




Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93