Friday with Carli

[ProShotPhoto]

Your comments and critiques are aprpeciated.

[SWING_THE_PHOTOG]

your model is very pretty, pic one is a little dark, could have used more light on her face. also that same pose on a bed or a couch or in a chair would be more interesting then a on the floor against the wall. even a patterned rug would have added some flare. also your focus is a little soft, you might want to sharpen that up some.

pic 2 is more lively, obviously. i like it. your lower right quadrant is over exposed and your upper left is a little dark. but the capture of the hair movement is fun.

[R_Fredrick_Smith]

Odd, I came to the post, and saw two photos and one missing in the middle. I did a refresh and then I see no photos, just three red x's. I tried going to your website link but get a 404. This was at 3:03 pm Central time on 9/18/2006.
Cheers,
rfs

[Kejacobson]

Same thing happened to me. I did figure out that if you refresh enought times you eventually get to see all three