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One of my first shoots
Old 09-18-2006, 03:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Tell me what you think of this one.
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Re: One of my first shoots
Old 09-18-2006, 06:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I think it's too small to be seen well. Generally, the pose, colors and lighting appear to be good, although I usually ask the model to cross her legs the opposite way, so you can see the full calf of the leg crossed over the top of the other.
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Re: One of my first shoots
Old 09-18-2006, 12:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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David i like the pic, its sexy, the girl is hot. i had a question for you, what filter or PS tool did u use to smooth out her skin?
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Re: One of my first shoots
Old 09-18-2006, 12:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like the shot, but the PS is way over the top - and I'm someone who likes that playboy smoothed out look. You should pick up a couple of books on retouching and work on refining that part of your work a bit. It wouldn't take much and would really send a photo like this one up a notch. Otherwise it's an ok shot.

As to the photographic, I'm not a fan of where you cropped her legs, especially for a portrait entitled, "LEGS"....

I may have added another light to provide a bit of separation.
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I like the shot, but the PS is way over the top - and I'm someone who likes that playboy smoothed out look. You should pick up a couple of books on retouching and work on refining that part of your work a bit. It wouldn't take much and would really send a photo like this one up a notch. Otherwise it's an ok shot.
As to the photographic, I'm not a fan of where you cropped her legs, especially for a portrait entitled, "LEGS"....
I may have added another light to provide a bit of separation.

I agree with the cropping as mentioned about- this would be a much better shot taken as landcape -
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