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Old 09-14-2006, 07:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Kimberly #4
Old 09-15-2006, 12:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Needs more negative space above the model. When you do the look up shot, you need adequate space for the model to look up to.
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Old 09-15-2006, 07:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Something else is bothering me. Her legs seem out of proportion to me....or maybe it is the shot angle?
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Re: Kimberly #4
Old 09-18-2006, 01:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Great shot - if i had my druthers i might have had her bent knee bent more - but that is a little issue.

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Re: Kimberly #4
Old 09-18-2006, 06:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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R Fredrick Smith- This is the original photo and I cropped out the fisherman vs. PS them out. Maybe I should have done the latter. Thanks of the input.
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R Fredrick Smith- This is the original photo and I cropped out the fisherman vs. PS them out. Maybe I should have done the latter. Thanks of the input.
Much better. You're right, just clone out the fisherman and your original in camera cropping was A1.

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