Last nights shots C&C welcome

[DeanP]

A couple images from last night. Appreciate your comments.





Thanks,
Dean

[DeanP]

Almost 200 views and no comments, are they that bad?

[Driftwood]

I already commented on the second image in a different forum.

I like the first image a lot, though I think it could be given a little more impact with a slight curves adjustment in Photoshop. Just to give the skin more of a glow.

[ProShotPhoto]

number 1
The pose, lighting and angle leaves me feeling the model is overweight. Her shoulder appears too large and lacking definition other than the exaggerated indent from the bra strap

number 2
I think it needs to be cropped severely to resolve the missing elbows and to remove the unnecessary and unattractive chair