First time post... need critiques.

[Agoailam]

Hi, all...
Looking for some feedback on a couple recent pix. THANKS!

[lsc1]

Welcome to G1. Your 1st post sure is a great introduction.

IMHO, #2 doesn't do anything for me. BUT, #1 is killer. I love the perspective, the pose, the makeup. It's very cool. The only thing that would make it stronger IMO is blurring the grass top left of the arm. I'd love to know what lens you shot #1 with and any details.

I hope you'll share some more.

Rule 10


Cheers,
LSC

[Frozty]

Image # 1 is really creative, the use of the angle to get the shot is really good.

On #2 I'd try to work a little bit with levels and add more detail in shadows.