Feedback please ALL critiques welcome

[Frozty]

Thought I'd share some pics so you can pls tell me what you think.
Thanks in advance.

[sculptor]

#1 The lighting is a bit too much on her right side and cheeks (close to being blown out.)

#2 An ackward looking pose. Drapery should flow and not look posed.

#3 Crop out the braclet because it's a distraction and the eyes could be in better focus.

#4 Crop out the light because it a big distraction.

-- Gary
http://www.bronzedreams.com

[Frozty]

Thanks for your comments, nice sculptures by the way

[jcochran]

I like 3 and 4 the most. And agree with the other comments. Sometime jewelry just gets in the way and I often ask models not to wear it.

A tighter crop on 4 making almost a head shot I think would have been good.