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Old 06-13-2006, 07:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Natalie G, a neighbors wheat field and guerilla photography.

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Re: In the wheat field
Old 06-13-2006, 10:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i love the setting! but she really doesn't "pop!" out of it much. i think a gold reflector or maybe even a very small mirror could have added some cool highlights and popped her out of the wheat.
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Re: In the wheat field
Old 06-14-2006, 03:56 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like it, but I'd lose the fussy blouse/dress. It seems a distraction. Her in white and wheat is a good combination.

If I have to be really picky (gulp), I'd suggest shooting from a slightly lower angle to get her head and arms out of the greenery in the background. But that's getting really picky.
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Old 06-14-2006, 07:10 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Her arms seem to me to blend too closely to the wheat at the horizon.
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Old 06-14-2006, 01:51 PM   #5 (permalink)
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There is a hole in the trees at wheat horizon level on the left that could be photoshoped out.

On first viewing my eye went right to it. It seemed to try and balance with the two highlights of her bra. If there were more than one gap in the trees I might not have noticed.
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Old 06-14-2006, 10:27 PM   #6 (permalink)
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One real easy thing to do is to bump the contrast up a little during postprocessing.

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