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Fire Station Shoot
Old 05-14-2006, 05:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I did this shoot with Elana at the local fire station on Friday night. Comments are welcome since I am still learning please!


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Re: Fire Station Shoot
Old 05-17-2006, 01:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Chris!

Looks like you had some fun at the fire station

Good shots! My only comments would be about the colour...To me the colours look too flat and need some punch (unless that is what you want).

On #3 her hair seems to blend into the shaddows too much.

Great Stuff...c u Friday!
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Re: Fire Station Shoot
Old 05-17-2006, 12:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hey mitch
Thanks. They do seem flat here, but will show you the originals on Friday, then you will see.

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Re: Fire Station Shoot
Old 05-17-2006, 11:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Good shots, all.

Number 1 is the one that really reaches me. It's her eyes. They are deep and I just wanted to go in a little farther.

Nice job!
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Re: Fire Station Shoot
Old 05-18-2006, 02:18 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks ViewFinder

The sad thing is that on this sitew it doesnt look as good as on other sites where it is uploaded and it was all the same photo!
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Re: Fire Station Shoot
Old 05-18-2006, 05:10 PM   #6 (permalink)
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#1 has potential if only you had included more of the helmet to let the viewer know that she is a firefighter.
#2 & #3 are throwaways because of her expression.

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#1 has potential if only you had included more of the helmet to let the viewer know that she is a firefighter.
#2 & #3 are throwaways because of her expression.

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Thanks for the comments. Understand your views on 2&3 as they were more fashionstyle images than glamour. She is not the smily type model

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