beach shots

[apinman]

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[apinman]

I dont get it, I see guys with 1200 views and 9 replys. Not much of a critique. Its crazy.

[silver tip images]

Patty Rock 3 I think is your best image for your web site and for the model.. Shows her off real well and lighting is good. Patty on the beach is also a nice shot lighting not as good. Need a fill on this side with the strong backlight... Patty Rock 2 I do not care for at all. Model has nice legs and she does not look like she is as pretty as she is...Well you have my two cents worth...Jerry

[SamBeasley]

Originally Posted by apinman

I dont get it, I see guys with 1200 views and 9 replys. Not much of a critique. Its crazy.

Well, it's probably because you just gave a link -- web surfers are L-A-Z-Y (including myself), so if you want more responses, you might wanna put the images in the actual post next time. Just a thought...

Sam

[VisonImage]

I'll agree that patty-rock-3 is probably the best all-round image to show of the model - Shows her face, etc. But I also like the B&W very much.

This particular forum is for critiques. Personally, I just don't feel like I could offer any suggestions that would have made the images better. That's why I didn't feel compelled, at first, to offer a comment.

[jcochran]

I have to agree, rock 3 is the best.

[whereismykit]

Great shots. You may want to resize some of the photos.



Also noticed you have some dirt on your sensor.

Wish I could do that well.

[Brian1]

I also concur with "rock 3" being the best of the five. I don't care for the shells because they seem too small for the model--sort of like an adult wearing a child's hat. I think the shot would have been better to leave the shells out completely. I like the warm lighting.

Your friend,
Brian

[Robear0001]

Sorry I didn't write the first time. I like the shot where your layed out with the clam. The b&w especially but I am a b&w lover. My only concern was the birds in the background look like blemishes or dust on a ccd...just my opinion.

In general, I love all them, great job...

robear

[sculptor]

Originally Posted by apinman

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OK, The WB is a bit off in #3 and the 45 degree tilt on the horizon doesn't
work for me. I like #1 and the B&W.
-- Gary