A couple of things. First off, the model is beautiful and I like the lighting, it's
right on'. For a model who does want to appear nude in the image, the fabric drape is just right. But her pose is awkward, it would be far better, in my opinion, if she were more profile to the camera. Second, the black on the right side is very distracting, the shot could be improved by simply croping it out. Finally, as a minor nit pick, her fingers below her right knee interfere with the line of the leg. It would be a bit stronger if her hand had not been there.
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