what do you make of this

[JohnEBoy]

Here is one from today,

thanks in advance.

[moscato_images]

Not much for the pasted in popcorn. Maybe if it was an add for that popcorn and had a logo and such, then it would work. Plus, I think the girl on the left is saying something to make fun of me. *clicks post quick reply...quickly!*



-joshua

[JohnEBoy]

thanks for the feedback. is the problem with the popcorn because it looks so pasted?

[Bonner]

I like the idea of the popcorn but there does not seem to be any connection with your subjects? What did I miss?

Jim

[moscato_images]

Originally Posted by JohnEBoy

thanks for the feedback. is the problem with the popcorn because it looks so pasted?

Not the PS work itself really, I just don't know what popcorn has to do with those two girls. Are they watching movies together?

-joshua

[cdnmoosey]

I like it. The slumber parties guys wish girls actually had.

[JohnEBoy]

thanks for all the comments. Maybe I should have a hand holding out the popcorn. or just get rid of it.

here is a different one without the popcorn

[Bonner]

This one is working for me.

[hedge]

I'm a fan John! Didn't even realise the popcorn was PSd in at first glance. I agree with Moosey re the slumber part "we wish" thing. I think the popcorn fits really well - it'd be a good first pic of a series if you added a title on the photo.

With the second one the girls look a bit too small in the photo - maybe you could crop in a little?

cheers,

adam

[JohnEBoy]

thanks hedge. That is the problem with many of them from this session, except it is usually the other way around. One of the girls is taller, but in that photo, it comes off the other way around. I had not thought of cropping to balance them.

on another topic, I dont know what is going on here. Is this GG? Is GG still around but this is the forums? I think I made some 'portfolios' here, but I don't know where they show up. well, I guess I should try and find a thread that explains what is happening.

john