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Old 03-18-2006, 10:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Thought I would throw up another one. Comments appreciated

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Old 03-18-2006, 11:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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A little washed in the Face IMHO .Unless that's what you where going after. I like the image though

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Old 03-18-2006, 11:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Scott I like this image. The one thing that keeps drawing my eye is the Bra strap. Maybe a closer crop to eliminate that would solve it. Nice B&W which I tend to like a lot these days.

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Old 03-19-2006, 02:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like the image - looks good but I do not like to see models looking off into space unless there is something which you intend to highlight such as her clothing. This image is about the model and and yet she takes herself out of the iamge by glancing off in into vacant space. EYE contact is missing so there is no one to relate to, and the page is turned very quickly only to stop at the next iamge where the subject realtes to the viewer.
I would paint out the line (looks like make up) on her left eye lid as it highights the need for a Makeup artist.
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Old 03-19-2006, 02:46 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I would paint out the line (looks like make up) on her left eye lid as it highights the need for a Makeup artist.
The MUA was Lamare...Guess I should have said that in the original post.
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The MUA was Lamare...Guess I should have said that in the original post.

I am sure Lamare is happy to see you immediatly post this info. Is this an attempt to provide credit or to escape the critique. At this point it is hard to tell but it looks like the later.

The line IS a result of your everexposure and not the MUA's work or skill level.
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Old 03-19-2006, 09:10 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I am sure Lamare is happy to see you immediatly post this info. Is this an attempt to provide credit or to escape the critique. At this point it is hard to tell but it looks like the later.
The line IS a result of your everexposure and not the MUA's work or skill level.

The make-up artist info was accidently forgotten in the original post.

I didnt respond to the critique becasuse I didnt take issue with it. I took it as your opinion and I attempted to learn something from it but now you are just being an A$$...So please refrain from commenting on my work and I will do the same for you and your "work"


Also, Buy a membership here and support the community. As far as I am concerned there should be NO free members other then models.

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A little washed in the Face IMHO .Unless that's what you where going after. I like the image though
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That is the look I wanted on this one... Thanks for the comment though. I do appreciate it.
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I like the image - looks good but I do not like to see models looking off into space unless there is something which you intend to highlight such as her clothing. This image is about the model and and yet she takes herself out of the iamge by glancing off in into vacant space. EYE contact is missing so there is no one to relate to, and the page is turned very quickly only to stop at the next iamge where the subject realtes to the viewer.
I would paint out the line (looks like make up) on her left eye lid as it highights the need for a Makeup artist.
I reworked the shot a little and I think the lines are a bit better.

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