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Old 03-18-2006, 05:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I am partly testing how this new board works and also asking for comments and critiques on all images. These are just some new shots form my last few shoots.





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Old 03-18-2006, 07:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hmmm.... Ok, I'll bite while I wait for a batch of NEFs to process...

First my usual disclaimer: if you intended it, it isn't wrong. I have struggled for hours to achieve a particular effect that other don't like. To bad. I only consider it "wrong" if it's not what you consciously set out to do. So, that being said, take this for what it's worth and remember how much you paid for it...

My favorite photos are the first two. I think you have a beautiful model, with great expressions. I like the makeup job and I feel the over all "look" works. In the first one though there seems to be a slight green color cast to the image. I would try and correct that. In the second image the color seems much more accurate, not sure about her left arm, but I do like the over all composition, so I'm not sure what you do about that. I don't like the amount of skin smoothing you used on this girl though. Did she have really bad skin? If not, I would redo these to and repost the images. I think there is more potential here than is currently showing.

Third image. Pretty girl, bad expression. Also I think you had her positioned to close to the background or you had the background light to hot (for my taste). Some people like flare and use it creatively but I don't feel it works here and I doubt you intended it. Pull the model further from the background if you have the room. I would also suggest metering the reflected light hitting your model. Place the meter at her back and take an incident reading of the light being reflected onto her. It should be less than your key. Stylistically, I don't like the shine suit with the boots. As a man I can't help but stare at that rack and wonder why she still has her top on, but I digress...

The third image doesn't appeal to me at all. I think you did a nice job of it technically, but I don't care for the model and over all it seems flat.

The last image again has more potential. The model is very cute and looks like she'd be a lot of fun to shoot with. I don't care for the blown highlights in her hair, but I'm processing a bunch of photos right now where I did everything I could to control latitude and I have some blown highlights... Digital's a bitch... I love the sofa you have her on, not sure I like the drapes, but I take it you were doing the best you could with what you had available. I think you achieved really nice color with this one. Were you shooting with available light? Oh, and I really like her ass....

That's it, just my $0.02

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Old 03-18-2006, 08:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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some cool photos here. congrats!
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Old 03-18-2006, 08:24 PM   #4 (permalink)
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nice and nice
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No Fair changing them after I post!!! LOL!

I like your new third one much, much better.
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Number one is the pick of the bunch! there is something mysterious.....
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I cant figure out what she has in mind, hence the mystery, it makes you look and think, well done
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No Fair changing them after I post!!! LOL!

I like your new third one much, much better.

I did not change them after any post

I hate it too when that happens - but it is also the case that I re-read my post and find rediculous spelling or comments numbered incorrectly etc.

So everyone here will let you off he hook LOL

Thanks for the comments though they are appreciated.
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