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Old 03-04-2006, 12:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Well since I am asking for feedback I might as well double the effort

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Re: new model
Old 03-04-2006, 05:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Skin looks a bit too soft, but it looks like a good exposure. As for composition, if you cropped into this shot from the original, you might pull out a little so that the elbox isn't cut off and the arm is allowed to come back to the left.

Good job otherwise.

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Re: new model
Old 03-04-2006, 07:21 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Looks good but could use some improvements. Maybe a little contrast and also it is cropped at two joints. One at her right wrist and the other at her left elbow. If you could crop in a tigher or show more of her in the picture so that she isn't cropped at those areas.



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Re: new model
Old 03-04-2006, 07:29 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks for the feed back. Going back and looking at the original the skin is quite as soft. I lost some sharpness when I raised the temperature (raw format). I also added a little blur to soften it, but not much of the blur layer is left. It is something I have to learn to judge better. And where to crop... I tried croping out the bottom of the shirt, because it wasn't flush with her skirt and I thought the skin showing was distracting. Going back I recropped the photo above the left elbow and it looks better. I have been trying to bring the hands more into the photo at the time the photo is taken but I was trying to get the body, arm, and legs to match the angle of the timbers.

I do appreciate the feedback.
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Re: new model NOT AFRAID TO SHOW MY MISTAKE
Old 03-04-2006, 07:47 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Here is the original of what I had to work with.

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Re: new model THE SHOT I WANTED
Old 03-04-2006, 07:49 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Here is the shot I wanted, but as you can see I blew out the skirt and blew my chances.

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Re: new model THE SHOT I WANTED
Old 03-05-2006, 12:42 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Did you by any chance shoot it in raw? Might be able to recover a bit that way.

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Re: new model NOT AFRAID TO SHOW MY MISTAKE
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Is it me or does this lovely lass remind anyone else of Jodie Foster???
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