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Krystle\'s Lingerie
Old 03-03-2006, 10:06 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Here are a couple shots of Krystle that I took recently. I would appreciate your feedback.

I'd like to see a little be better expression from her, but I continue to struggle with helping the model in that area.


Does this shot do anything for you? What do you think?
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Re: Krystle\'s Lingerie
Old 03-03-2006, 01:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like most everything about this images except the background. In my opinion, if it does not add anything to your subject, (the background) crop it or blur it so the eyes does not go to it.

There are about 5 layers of objects behind her but the light blue attracts the eye a lot. I would experiment with your blur and burn tool, especially the flash reflextion on the upper left.

The bottom images has the same situation but the image is somewhat weaker.

One small item, most professionals well tell you to crop the hand out of the image rather than have fingers cut off. In your image, that would force you to crop above the other hand. Look at it and see the effect. I think that the image would look just fine cropped just below the breasts.

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Re: Krystle\'s Lingerie
Old 03-03-2006, 01:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree about the background, I would like to see it a little softer. As far as the second image maybe if she rolled her face more toward the camera and we saw her beautiful eyes I would like the image better.

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Re: Krystle\'s Lingerie
Old 03-03-2006, 10:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I really like number except for the blue line across the background - i find tis is a bit distracting because it is not fitting the color scheme.

Number 2 is one of those shots where you might help the model. All natural women flatter like pancakes when laying down at there are techniques to enhance the look of the breasts. The pose is too simple and too relaxed so there is nothing I find note worthy about the image other than it is well taken.

Here is an example of a much older and natural woman who should be flattening out much more – in fact she flattens out standing - but looks better endowed although she is not. The posture and the angle we take the shot have a lot tot do with the outcome. For this reason i do not think you did your best to flatter this model. In fact SHE is not in the image - she is looking in another direction in order to force us to focus on another asset rather than on her.



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