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Cherry B 2nd shoot
Old 03-01-2006, 03:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Cherry B (MM 99702) came over again last week. These were shot with a single hot light. I'd love to hear your comments on everything. Poses, lighting, how's the contrast, does it look sharp enough? Thanks for looking.




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Old 03-01-2006, 04:58 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Overall I like them but the both need work on the black end. The first one has obvious black painting on it. Looks like your monitor needs adjusting. You probably have the contrast set too high or brightness too low.

My other point an opinion which some people would disagree with: If the second picture was mine I'd do a bit of PS work on some of the small shadows and the camera right thigh to make it more flattering.

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Thanks for the comments Mike. You're right about my monitor, I brought the brightness up and the black painting jumped out at me.

I did try do some touch up on the little shadows before I posted but it kept looking too obvious to me. I just need more practice. When you say you'd touch up the right thigh do you mean you'd make it thinner? not sticking out so much?

Before I changed the settings on my monitor that thigh blended into the background so I may just tweak the levels a bit to get back to that point.

How did you light the photo you posted?
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When you say you'd touch up the right thigh do you mean you'd make it thinner? not sticking out so much?

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How did you light the photo you posted?

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