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Old 02-25-2006, 12:24 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Not sure why it seems blurry here. In PS it is nice and sharp. Am I missing something when I'm getting an image ready for the web? I did not use any blur in post. Applied a little USM as the first time i uploaded it I thought my eyes were really messed up because the image was really blurry. That or my monitor is giving up the ghost

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Your image has a very odd split down the middle. The background color is different on the left/right, her hair is a different color AND texture...even her eyes appear different colors. I'm not sure if you were going for this effect or not, but I believe it's distracting.
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it is a decent capture but I think that you should diffuse the main light more - i can see a really small catchlight in the eyes - and it is causing 'harsh' shadows. Also, the 'hairlight' or light to the right is too strong. The hair on that side really sticks out and is causing a very bright spot on the tip of the models nose.

you might also want to put a white reflector below the models face.



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Thanks John, appreciate the comments, I will try again and move the hairlight back so its not so bright, The main light was a softbox. Had the light facing forward, might try turning that around to bounce light off the back of the box do diffuse it more. Rekkon pratice makes perfect...got a lot of practicing to do.

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