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Tuesday evenings shoot
Old 02-22-2006, 11:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Tuesday evenings shoot
Old 02-23-2006, 01:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Gus,

In the first shot, her right eye looks like she was punched and has a black eye because of the shadow and my eyes don't seem to like her positioning in the photo. My mind tells me she is too high in the frame but I'm not sure why. I think I would have cropped it so that she wasn't so high up however, that would create some problems with her arms I think. She is obviously a very beautiful young lady though.

The second shot I like. It's daring, alluring, and lit pretty well. A little fill on the left side of her head would bring out her hair a bit more but I like it. I think I would have moved the stool just a bit to your right to get that wall edge out of the picture. It forms a second edge in the photo and there is something on the floor around the corner that draws my eyes to it because it's white.

Overall, nice work. I do hope you have some more work with this lovely lady you'd like to share!

Good day!

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Re: Tuesday evenings shoot
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I agree. The first image is not properly lit. The sahdows does not work to the image or models advantage.

The second has a great facial expression and pose too, I like it very much. The framing could be better though.
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