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Old 02-16-2006, 06:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi everyone

I am restarting my career here in the States and I finally upload some of my portfolio to my web site. Please give me your honest opinion on my work, including if you think that girls may find it offensive or anything like that. I am in the process of defining my style so I can use a lot of feedback.

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Old 02-16-2006, 09:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Mauricio:

I went to your site and found only two links out of nine that worked on your commercial page. Only your wedding and glamour sections have all the links that work.

I would create a seperate page for your glamour and nude work as a good many people won't hire a photographer for business purposes because of it.

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Old 02-16-2006, 11:34 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with Rick, you should have 2 seperate sites.
Also the one marketing page has the photo of the girl in shorts and a hardhat
I would think she should be on the glamour side
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Old 02-17-2006, 01:14 AM   #4 (permalink)
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looks good to me. i tried to find the potentially offensive part but couldn't find it. that ain't right! i'm very disappointed.
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Old 02-17-2006, 04:49 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I forgot to tell, the website is not finished, right now only the portfolio and glamour areas of models are working as well as weddings. The commercial part has many unfinised parts so no need to go there, except if you want to give me your opinion about the girl on shorts. See in Mexico is very customary to put atractive girls wearing miniskirts or shorts in advertasing materials, but I don't know if in here it may be bad practice.
Another important thing is I have separated pages for weddings and all the rest, since I believe the wedding market is very sencitive. If you use www.myunforgettablewedding.com instead of www.unforgettableimage.com it takes you to the weddings area and there is no link there to the main site.

Thanks for all your input.


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I liked what you did, the graphic layout and flow are good. Clicking on the images sends you to a separate page with the image only. Unless I missed something, I needed to back up to click on another pic. Another thing is you are allowing your visitors the ability to right click and save your images. Granted, anyone with some know-how can get the pics anyway and they are generally downloaded in temp files anyway. Did you consider some script that controls the display of your image while leaving the rest of the page intact.

overall I like what you have going and your end result will be very nice and workable.

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I think it is different than alot of photographer sites. The one thing that stands out to me, is you 'main' shot. The model with the red lips -- looks like a snapshot.

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ROFL
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Awesome shot, Rick!! She's way too hot!

Good day sir!

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