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First Shoot for 2006
Old 02-15-2006, 09:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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First shoot for the year, so please, comment and let me know what you like and don't like.

Heather say's she hasn't modeled in years, a great personality and fun to work with.

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Re: First Shoot for 2006
Old 02-15-2006, 10:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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#1 Looks soft to me, except for her face which is in sharp focus and has a nice amount of contrast,

#2 Same thing as #1, and her hair lacks separation from the background. A hairlight would have improved this shot in my opinion.

#3 I like this one the best,..interesting how the net stockings form a curve and look web like.
The images and her skin tone look a little light to me, but could be my monitor.
Heather is beautiful, and I really like the expressions in her eyes.

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Re: First Shoot for 2006
Old 02-16-2006, 06:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments...

Yes, I wanted the eyes and face sharp and the rest of her body softly focused. I wasn't a big fan of the fish net hose when she walked out with them on, but it turned out nicely.

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Old 02-18-2006, 04:43 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like the pose in # 1 and Heather is certainly a beautiful young Lady.

What I don't like is the interruption in the red background in the upper right corner; in my opinion the background should have followed the curvature of her bum out of the frame.

I don't like the pink thong as that splash of colour pulls the viewers eyes away from the models face.

I like the softness of focus on her face but you might want to go back in and sharpen just her eyes.

I don't like the skin tone and think you need to do a little work with ether curves or levels to correct this, the images is cool

I don't like the fact that her left hand is much lighter in skin tone and actually has a transition line in tone right at her wrist.

I don't like that you cropped this images in as tight as you have severing the models arm and having it reappear back into the frame, however this type of crop I see often with fashion wear.

#2 love the pose but,

Again your skin tone is off a bit levels or curves will help or correct the problem in your camera with your white balance assuming you are using digital.

I don't like the splash of colour in her slacks again pulling the attention away from the face.

Back to the face, the models right eye is detached from her head a common mistake in portrait/glamour photography.

I agree that the hair is lost in the background but admit I make this mistake often myself and a hair light does help.

#3 Again I love the pose

Skin tone is cool, models right hand being forward more causes some odd distortion but that's slight.

What I would like to comment on is that you should have had her turn her head a little more towards the camera so the right eye isn't detached and there are more equal whites in her eyes.

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