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Beach shot of Janet- Opinions?
Old 02-15-2006, 11:20 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Beach shot of Janet- Opinions?
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It looks like the contrast needs to be tweaked a little, and I can't see any detail in her hair, though that could be my monitor. Then her white shirt looks very white (blown out) in some places. I'm also not too crazy about those spots of water on her top.

The crop makes me want to see more of that belly of hers.

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Re: Beach shot of Janet- Opinions?
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It's a nice shot. I like the composition, pose, light, etc. The contrast does indeed need a bit of tweaking, though. Try playing with the "Levels" and see what you can come up with. You've got a nice shot to work with.
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Re: Beach shot of Janet- Opinions?
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Also check there is definite magenta/red cast to the photo.
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Re: Beach shot of Janet- Opinions?
Old 02-15-2006, 02:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Not one of your better images. I don't feel the focus is right, or the exposure and color balance. Her expression looks like she is not enjoying herself. Then there is the pose you choose for us. I think the elbows and the arm pits are two of the least attractive body parts for our models. And the crop at the hips does not often work.

The house could have been out of view if you had moved to your right a little and I like horizons to be level.

Next time, have props for your model and make a purpose for the photograph...make it more that an image of a pretty woman.

Gee, I feel like Simon Cowell of American Idol, but I do not care for it. Show us your best works.

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She is a beautiful model...
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.. I do think that this picture needs some post production to remove distractions.

OR

change the crop.
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