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Very sexy Cheryl
Old 02-14-2006, 07:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I am still new at all this so honest and helpful critiques please!










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Re: Very sexy Cheryl
Old 02-14-2006, 09:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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These are all much better (overall) in terms of quality than in your other post.

A few nits, most of which are strictly personal preference:

All images except #1, the skin is too smooth. While not unnaturally smooth and waxy, it's *too* flawless - on the plus side, the smoothing work is MUCH better than in your other post that I commented on - smooth and even without flattening or muddying. Again, my personal taste here.

#1: I don't care for the shot going "up the highway" as it were. Again, personal preference. Your lighting looks on, no overwhelming hotspots, good DOF control in the setting, color looks good on my monitor.

#2 doesn't load for me.

#3: Love the FUN being had! Three items: The silver reflector gets lost within the silver brella - perhaps reversing the brella to the white site or using a gold brella would be better. She has some funky shadowing on her face in this image, resemblant of a five o'clock shadow. I get that with some models in some setups sometimes too, I have no idea what the solution is. On her left side, at her hip where the boyshort gathers into her, I'd bump her waist in just a tad above where the boyshort pulls her in. She's certainly not fat, but that little bulge above the boyshort doesn't help that.

#4: Blurry, dreamy, angelic setup. While I'm not a fan of that look or style, well done. I also like the offset/use of negative space, it's something that I've been playing with recently.

#5: Clever crop, nice tease, good lines and angles. I dig it! Some may bag on you about the wronkled/rolled up top, but that's what happens when you roll up a longer top.

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Re: Very sexy Cheryl
Old 02-14-2006, 11:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I think Jon fairly well covered the critique well on all your shots.
Personally I like #1 here, not for the obvious but because I think overall the expression and DOF give it merit. I do think if you were to crop it just above her white panties, it bcomes even better. JMO

I also like the playfulness of #3, although I agree with Jon on the changing of the umbrella, her hat does show up on my monitor.

Good work, keep posting.
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Re: Very sexy Cheryl
Old 02-15-2006, 12:25 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I really like #2. Nice soft light. Framed well. Very nice.

You might also find that you'll get better/more responses if you limit the number of photos in your post; 5 is just too many. 1-2 is best.

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Re: Very sexy Cheryl
Old 02-15-2006, 02:42 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Yes she is, but all of the images except for #2 are way too magenta. It's the first thing that catches my eye. # 2 looks good.





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Re: Very sexy Cheryl
Old 02-15-2006, 10:50 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Most of the images are a little soft for me. Her skin looks way too good, almost plastic.

#1 What were you thinking? What purpose does that serve?

#2 Having her lie flat on her belly does nothing to flatter he curves. She got some nice hips. However, in this one, I don't get the impression she does. Try having her roll over to her left a little in the hips only and shift the camera a little to the left as well. Nice DOF and, color, and clarity in this one.



#3 Interesting concept.

#4 Way too much blur

#5 Watch how she leans on her arms. When a girl puts her arms down and leans on the like that, it makes their upper arms near the armpit look fat. When you get ready to shoot it, have her pick her weight up off her arm.



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Old 02-15-2006, 05:31 PM   #7 (permalink)
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... For the most part I side with Mr. Howard on all points. I would just add that the pictures get progressively better and the strap and silver 'hat' in pic 3 needs to go!

just my two cents.
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