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Amanda and London, from out of the shadows
Old 02-13-2006, 11:04 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A couple things I like about it, a couple things I don't like about it, how 'bout you?

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Re: Amanda and London, from out of the shadows
Old 02-14-2006, 12:44 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Here's what I see.

Things I don't like:
The left model's back leg looks disconnected from her body. And the shadows from her hands look like claws.

Things I like:
The right model's expression. The contrast between the softer look of the left model and the harder look of the right.



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Re: Amanda and London, from out of the shadows
Old 02-14-2006, 01:37 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I am really bothered by the back left leg. I would rather it not be in the picture. It just seems disconnected. The other thing I would do is crop it as tight to the models as possible. Makes for a more dramatic image.



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Re: Amanda and London, from out of the shadows
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Thats freakin sweet!!! i would just crop right above the (model on my left) models knee and see how you like it. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img]

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Re: Amanda and London, from out of the shadows
Old 02-14-2006, 04:05 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for your input.

Here's a slightly tighter crop, with the back leg removed; looking more closely, I do agree with that observation very much, thank you.

The claw-like shadows were actually intended, the succubus readying for the enforcement of the final act (though apparently I didn't translate it well).

I was also pleasantly surprised with London's relative leanness and definition - the last time I'd seen her she was just as small, but softer and smoother. I too like the contrast in body type/condition.

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Re: Amanda and London, from out of the shadows
Old 02-14-2006, 04:09 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hi Tom, good to hear from you and thanks for the input.

Since it was mentioned, I agree with the statements about the rear leg...

Here's a tighter crop, with the rear leg removed...Not really sure if I like the crop better, but I don't dislike it [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Re: Amanda and London, from out of the shadows
Old 02-14-2006, 04:13 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Hi Hailey - thank you for the kind remarks and input.

Now, I hadn't even considered cropping that high for loss of the overall form...Tom above mentioned a tighter crop frrom the original, which I wasn't sure of, but your high crop thoughts sent me a different direction based on his.


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Much more powerful image with the distracting legs and negative space above their heads cropped out.. Awesome work, i love shadowy, artistic stuff like this. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]


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I'm a believer now. I've been watching the progression here of cropping. I have to say the last crop has a much more powerfull and emotional look to it.
Good job. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Thank you Frank [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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