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not glamour at all just critique wanted
Old 02-10-2006, 12:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Okies I did a pic, of a camera of all things. But i wanted a critiue anyways please? I figured I could make it look artsy fartsy and stuff.
Here's the result.




it's posted on this ebay auction.
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Re: not glamour at all just critique wanted
Old 02-10-2006, 03:50 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I'm not sure about artsy, looks like an old magazine ad from the seventies. But I would reshoot with a slightly wide DOF so the forground eliments are sharper. Then I would retouch some of the distracting items like spots on the lenses and background. I might also try several slightly different angles to get a little more of the lense body detail, or stand one up as is common in these types of ads. ALso WB is off but that goes with the old Ad theme.

If you are going for art for arts sake, think would I post an 16x20 of this on my office wall? If not then by definition, it is substandard, at least for you.

But do you like it? If so nuf said.
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I have missed that! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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