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Contemplation (N) Would like to hear your thoughts.
Old 01-29-2006, 04:43 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Contemplation (N) Would like to hear your thoughts.
Old 01-29-2006, 05:35 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Great soft shot!

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Re: Contemplation (N) Would like to hear your thoughts.
Old 01-29-2006, 05:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I love the shot but for one ting. The shadow on the left breast is distracting to me and actully puts me off a bit. It distorts the breats shape and therefor aan providea no asthetic enhancmenets. Sorry but it is the only thing I do not appreciate about the image.
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Re: Contemplation (N) Would like to hear your thoughts.
Old 01-29-2006, 10:13 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I like the pose in general.

However, the shadow patterns on breast, arm, stomach, etc I find distracting.
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Old 01-29-2006, 10:42 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the shot.

In regards to the distracting shadows I agree that they detract from the image. If the shadows had been more uniform such as the shadows of leaves above or some kind of fabric (Such as fabric held above her head out of the shot. I think it would have worked better.

My other thought is that her shoulders are too far forward and I would prefer them back more to show off her breasts more prominently.

I would have also picked an earlier time in the day to lessen the harshness of the light on her breast or alternatively converted the image to b&w



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Old 01-31-2006, 10:03 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I like the shot, for me it almost has a soft quality to it.
JMO, as someone else mentioned, I think an earlier sun would have soften the her even more.
I like the shadow effect, especialyy on her right breast as though the shadow was caressing her.
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Old 01-31-2006, 04:37 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Thanks Paolo! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Old 01-31-2006, 04:39 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks Glenn.

I know what you mean about the shadows. She was sitting in the shade of a tree. I can't decide whether I like the shadow effect or would prefer it without.
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Old 01-31-2006, 04:41 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Thanks for taking the time to comment Gus. Others have commented on the shadows too.
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Old 01-31-2006, 04:49 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments Taylor.

I agree with you about the strength of the highlights on her breasts. It's my major gripe with the image.
The shoulder position I was happy with. Despite her being nude, I wanted a look that was more shy and reserved.
A few people have commented on the shadows, and I can't make up my mind. The majority consensus seems to be that they detract from the picture, so I guess I must listen to the majority view.

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