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Old 01-28-2006, 11:40 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi

Just took this tonight...what do you think? How can I improve this shot.

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Old 01-29-2006, 12:00 AM   #2 (permalink)
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...what do you think? How can I improve this shot.

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Well, Ahmad.. the first thing I'd shoot for is an image with her eyes open, looking at the camera, and some sort of expression on her face that gives the impression that she's enjoying the session. Right now, you've got a well-lit, well-exposed, well-focused, but poorly-timed image that doesn't show much, if any, of the model's personality or gives us insight into what she's thinking/doing at this time.

Some other small nits - see the wire in the bill of the cap right above the bridge of her nose? Bare wire/hoop. Cover that up, either for real or in Photoshop. And, the stray hair on her left eyebrow could have been dealt with before the shot.

So, tell us that you got other shots of this young lady that do her better justice, yes? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

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Old 01-29-2006, 08:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi,

Thanks for the comments...I know about the stray hair...working on it

I'll be posting another one soon...

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Old 01-29-2006, 10:48 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I like the hat. It adds alot to the shot. The model is pretty. I agree with the comments about showing a shot with the eyes looking at the viewer. I think the hat should have been placed a little higher to her eye on the left is exposed more. I also find the minor blemishes on her face distracting. You can remove them with the cloning tool in Photoshop.



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