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Old 01-26-2006, 10:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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First time taking photos like this, and first time using strobes. Please give me some feedback so that I can improve for the next shoot in a couple of weeks.

Thanks for looking!

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Old 01-26-2006, 11:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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First time? Holy smokes!! I wish my stuff looked this good the first time out!!! Wow!!! cant wait to see your second go at it!! Looks like you have an eye for beauty!! mmmm tips?..Im not sure Im qualified!! this stuff looks great to me!


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Old 01-27-2006, 12:48 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the background you had her on. Pretty girl

1 - Vantage point is interesting and caught my eye. The hand she is resting on is a bit awkward
2 - I like the pose. Did you enhance her eyes in photoshop?
3 - Not enough light in her eyes
4 - The pink outfit really pops against this background.
5 - Best shot of all with her arms and legs leading the eye to her eyes. Did you enhance her eyes in photoshop?

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Re: First time!
Old 01-27-2006, 05:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I agree for the first time shooting these are great.

Watch your depth of field - I find the backgrounds are too close to the model or simply too sharply focused. Most of these shots would benefit with a little less distraction from the backdrops. I use white and black or plain backgrounds to help avoid this issue. The image should be about the model (sinject) not he background.

The poses are interesting and your shooting from good angles – Well done.


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Old 01-27-2006, 05:34 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 01-27-2006, 11:48 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Awesome! I am preparing for my first shoot as well! I would only hope to produce such great shots right out of the shoot!
Good Job!
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Old 01-27-2006, 06:10 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comment, I will definitely keep that in mind!
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Thanks, #5 is my fav as well.

Yes, I worked on the eyes as well as the rest of the image.. do they look unnatural?
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thank you and good luck to you as well!
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thank you for your comments!!
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