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My first composite attempt, and fun at the slide...
Old 01-26-2006, 02:08 AM   #1 (permalink)
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C&C as always appreciated.

1. Twins???


2. The Slide


Model: Peggy
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Re: My first composite attempt, and fun at the slide...
Old 01-26-2006, 07:46 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Which one's Peggy? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

In the first picture, did you know you were going to do a composite? IMO it may have been better to have some slight difference, say hair or a piece of clothing in each picture. Difficult if you weren't planning it when you shot.

The other thing that seems a bit odd is the really black shadows on the right hand jeans.

I like both pictures, particularly the second one.

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Re: My first composite attempt, and fun at the slide...
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Nicely done [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]
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My first composite attempt V2
Old 01-26-2006, 12:57 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for the feedback so far! I've redone the thing from scratch, as I had some issues with shadows and matching blacks that needed to be fixed. So here for more comment and critique is V2 of Peggy and Peggy...



I'm braced for impact... so let me have it!

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This is much better processing than the first one.

Just my opinion, FWIW, is that the near blacks need to be lowered slightly more and/or some cloning of the wrinkles in the backdrop.

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I like it!!!




 
 
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