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Chelsea
Old 01-24-2006, 06:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Checking to see if I'm getting any better?

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Re: Chelsea
Old 01-24-2006, 06:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice work... Only one problem she most likely lives in Washington Sate and that is no where near South Carolina...

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Re: Chelsea
Old 01-24-2006, 07:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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So true... she just exudes beauty...
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Re: Chelsea
Old 01-24-2006, 07:21 PM   #4 (permalink)
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beautiful girl, beautiful shot but -just one opinion here- you need to clean up the veins in her eyes and maybe smooth out that sort of rough patch of skin/makeup under her eyebrows...?

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Re: Chelsea
Old 01-24-2006, 08:39 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Great image! It would be somewhat better if the eys and nose hole were improved with a few Photoshop tools. -Jim



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Re: Chelsea
Old 01-25-2006, 01:19 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Not sure where you started, but this is a very nice shot. Great work!!!

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Re: Chelsea
Old 01-25-2006, 02:47 PM   #7 (permalink)
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A pretty girl. Nice shot of her face and shoulders.

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I agree about the rough spot below her eyebrow, maybe turn off sharpening over that area.
There are a few blemishes that you could clone out with photo shop
The bags under her eyes could be resolved with some makeup or (not my preference) with photoshop
I think an increase in contrast would help the image pop more and bring out more color in her skin tone



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Re: Chelsea
Old 01-25-2006, 10:55 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments Taylor.. i'm working on all the suggestions and will post a resubmit... on a steep learning curve here... I see that we are not to far apart.... I admire your work...

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Re: Chelsea
Old 01-26-2006, 06:19 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Ok after all of your good advice I reworked the PS and am resubmitting this for your critiques... Thanks for all the honest input... that's the only way I can push myself to get better

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