Lens Diaries Go Now
Glamour, Beauty, Nude, Models, Photographers

*    |  Register  


 
Go Back   Garage Glamour™ > Garage Glamour™ Community Related Forumss > Photo Reviews & Critiques Only
 

Photo Reviews & Critiques Only Constructive & professional critiques only

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Am I getting the hang of it yet?
Old 01-22-2006, 08:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
Fotografir

 
Fotografir's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2005
Member GG#: 43187
Location: Conway
Posts: 48
Comments: 0
My Mood:
Send a message via AIM to Fotografir

Fotografir is offline IP: 66.153.138.37
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

[img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]
  View Public Profile Send a private message to Fotografir Visit Fotografir's homepage! Find More Posts by Fotografir
 
Re: Am I getting the hang of it yet?
Old 01-23-2006, 07:22 AM   #2 (permalink)
Lifetime Photographer

 
RSStory's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Member GG#: 38048
Location: Grand Rapids
Posts: 916
Comments: 0
Send a message via AIM to RSStory Send a message via MSN to RSStory Send a message via Yahoo to RSStory

RSStory is offline IP: 172.154.51.198
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Not with this shot. I think I would scrap it. You have better in your portfolio. If you are going to crop that tight then you should have brought her face higher in the frame and showed more at the bottom. Also, it looks like there is ear rings or something in the lower right corner that are kinda distracting. Keep shooting.

Scott

  View Public Profile Send a private message to RSStory Visit RSStory's homepage! Find More Posts by RSStory
 
Re: Am I getting the hang of it yet?
Old 01-23-2006, 10:28 AM   #3 (permalink)
Free Member

 
BGPhoto's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Member GG#: 45260
Location: USA!!! USA!!! USA!!!
Posts: 607
Comments: 0
Send a message via AIM to BGPhoto

BGPhoto is offline IP: 64.207.15.254
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

The best thing you could do for your photography is to destroy your built-in flash. This shot had some potential, but the on-camera flash produces such a flat light that the shot becomes boring. Either get your flash off camera, or stop using it all together.
  View Public Profile Send a private message to BGPhoto Visit BGPhoto's homepage! Find More Posts by BGPhoto
 
Re: Am I getting the hang of it yet?
Old 01-23-2006, 11:22 AM   #4 (permalink)
Lifetime Photographer

 
moscato_images's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2005
Member GG#: 43840
Location: Peoria
Posts: 606
Comments: 2
Send a message via ICQ to moscato_images Send a message via AIM to moscato_images Send a message via Yahoo to moscato_images

moscato_images is offline IP: 12.221.236.136
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

flat lighting. try a flash where it's not connected to your camera and much better results will automatically start happening. shoot some more and post again! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

-joshua
  View Public Profile Send a private message to moscato_images Visit moscato_images's homepage! Find More Posts by moscato_images
 
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
You can hang me now! insanepinoy Tech Talk Forum 12 10-19-2005 05:52 PM
I think I'm getting the hang of this lighting thing. StMarc Main Community Forum 4 10-03-2005 10:05 AM
Sometimes I think I just might be getting the hang of this! j4m3z Photo Reviews & Critiques Only 5 02-16-2005 02:29 AM
Hang in there! Nathaniel_Goldstock Photo Reviews & Critiques Only 4 04-18-2004 04:04 PM


New To Site? Need Help? Photographer & Model Links
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 11:56 AM.

© 1999-2017 Garage Glamour™




Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93