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Another of Rachel Advice welcomed
Old 01-19-2006, 05:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Another of Rachel Advice welcomed
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My opinion ...
She has a beautiful smile .
I like it !

Nice pose but kinda looks like she is hiding one of the tats, at least I thought so
But any lower would look goofy holding her elbow I guess

I don't have much practice with studio lighting but a hair light to seperate her from the dark background might have been nice to see

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When I first look at an image I get the initial reaction to it. Then I squint and see what stands out from a contrast standpoint as that confirms were my eyes drawn to where they should go. Keep in mind that is where 'I thought they should go'. The creation is yours and I do not know what your goal was. Here is what I see. The largest brightest area in the image is her stomach (wonderful stomach) but do I want people to contemplate her navel. While that area may grab my first glance can I get from there to her face or whatever you decide is the point of interest. You started well in that there is that curve thing going on where I could flow to her face but I meet crossed arms and that stops me. So Next chance, can I get to her face? Well, there are these tattoos, not just any tattoos complex and colorful tattoos so I will hang there awhile.

It took me a long time to get to her pretty face, in my mind too long. Yes as mentioned a hair light would help but I can see full separation it's just that point is minimal to what I have mentioned, at least to me.


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