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Some Lingerie...
Old 01-17-2006, 01:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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...Just because! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

The model is Justine Lynn out of New Jersey





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Re: Some Lingerie...
Old 01-17-2006, 02:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Some Lingerie...
Old 01-17-2006, 02:28 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like these Ed, sort of like something I tried to do, but mine weren't as good. I really like the necklace and earrings in the first one, I think they match well with her panties. In the second one I'm not too thrilled about the hand coming in front the top. Third one her left hand looks a little uncomfortable in that position. Nice work.

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Old 01-17-2006, 03:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Great picture!

I love them.

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Old 01-17-2006, 04:51 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Model is attractive and the poses are generally good.

Cropping is what bothers me on these photos.

#1 seems jammed against the top (need a bit more head room). Backs of hands are often a problem and in this case they are because they're too sharp and they become almost more prominent than the model.

#2 is very jammed and the upper hand seems to come out of nowhere. Left hand works well in this one, but you should have showed the upper arm to complete the pose.

#3 is the best shot, but jammed against the right side (needed more black space on the right). I would not have cropped off the fingers on the left, but cropped a little lower to include them.

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Old 01-18-2006, 12:01 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Here is my non-technical/photography jargon free critique.
Awesome! I love them, #2 is my favorite...maybe because I'm
a female and I tend to look more at the face than the body.
I like #3 over #1 because she looks a little uncomfortable or
strained in the first one to me, but like I said before they
are all great to me. I like the mixture of editorial/fashion with
glamour.

Hope to see more!
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