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Mariela in her suitcase - Pictorial
Old 01-17-2006, 12:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Mariela in her suitcase









Feedback welcome and appreciated.

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Old 01-17-2006, 02:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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a fun concept. the model's "looK" is not-so-often seen. what did you shoot these images with? they have a cool, edgy, gritty-ness to them.

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Old 01-17-2006, 04:56 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well #1 has lots of "potential" but is just too cluttered and as a result the theme is ruined in my opinion. Also the exposure seems off to me. And I don't care for cropping off the rest of one leg and hand. The pose needed to keep the whole body in the photo. This could be a great classical pinup if you just reduced it to the minimum needed. In other words, the girl, the suitcase and the hair dryer (and lose the cord - make it a battery one). Then lighten it up and put it on a seamless white background and you'd have a great photo.



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Old 01-18-2006, 03:06 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hello Jimmy

Thanks for the compliment!!!

These shots were taken with a Nikon D70 with white balance set to shade for warmth. I had a steady video light and a studio strobe to give the double shadows. The shots were a little underexposed then lightened in photoshop.

Thanks again.......... -Glenn

Here's two more from that portion of the test shoot.








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Old 01-18-2006, 03:23 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hello Fredrick,

Thanks for the feedback!

I'm definately gonna try this again. This model just kept running around the studio doing all kinds of crazy things and getting into everything she could find.
She'd do something and I'd say "hold on - let me set up a light" and by the time I got one, she'd be doing something completely different. I was going crazy chasing her around and trying not to miss anything.

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