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Old 01-16-2006, 11:23 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Well since my last one didn't get any comments or suggestions. I will try again.

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Re: Another try
Old 01-16-2006, 11:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Sometimes it's helpful to ask for specific input. It can be difficult for someone else to know what you're looking for input on, so they just don't say anything at all. Just my two cents.

I think this image has potential, but is too flat. Try working with the levels tool to increase the contrast...pull out some highlights, and deepen the shadows.

Your other image (pink) is nice. My only comment is that the pose looks a bit drastic to me. She's leaned too far forward for my taste.
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Re: Another try with Revised photo
Old 01-16-2006, 12:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments. On the other photo I agree there is too much lean, but I went with it for the expression. And here is a revised photo after playing with contrast. thanks for the suggestion. I think it is better


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Re: Another try with Revised photo
Old 01-16-2006, 02:28 PM   #4 (permalink)
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It looks like you tried to bring back the details after you smoothed out the skin. The skin looks smooth, but you can see texture around the eyes, lips and on the nose. Maybe if you did it at a lower opacity it would be less noticable. Other than that, the picture looks good. Well, a reflecter on the right would help keep the side of her face and ear from going black.

I know you should post an image when you critique a picture, but I didn't have one handy. I'll try to post one later. I figure that giving you input is more important than seeing my pictures???
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Re: Another try with Revised photo
Old 01-16-2006, 05:09 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it without the required photo. You are correct on your assessment of the photo and my desire to have info sans photo.

It seems to always be something improve photo skill, then improve post prosessing skills.

But this forum is a great place to learn.
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