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Shooting with Sheena
Old 01-11-2006, 09:47 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Camera; Canon
Lighting; Natural with added reflector
Lens; 28-200mm f/3.5 to f/5.6

Original image with an additional crop on the second photo.





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Re: Shooting with Sheena
Old 01-11-2006, 02:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hello,

Model is beautiful. The setting is very nice. Lighting is good.
Nice position of the hands

1- would have prefered for you to move a bit more to put the out of focus posts a little further to her left or out of the shot if possible
2 - Crop is better. I find her pose a bit awkward
3 - There is a crease under her chin that you could photo shop out
4 - Smile seems a little posed and the eyes don't match

Just my thoughts for what it is worth.

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Re: Shooting with Sheena
Old 01-12-2006, 04:36 AM   #3 (permalink)
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The first thing i see is two very large elbows - consider persepcitive it distorts the size of the forgoround. FOr this reason alone the crop is a huge improvement and probably (if yu think about it) the main reason you thought to crop it

Soetimes weant this affect persepcitve give us as sometimes it is flattering to the model, or serves a purpose for the image in some genres.



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Old 01-12-2006, 09:53 AM   #4 (permalink)
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You wouldn't happen to be from the French speaking part of Canada would you? I met a married couple from there several weeks ago while on vacation and they were rather nice people. By the way, nice big boots your model has there.

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