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Old 01-10-2006, 08:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi

Thanks for all the comments I got in my previous posts.

Here is another one. What do you think?

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Re: New picture for critique
Old 01-10-2006, 10:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Ahmad,

The image has some nice symmetry going for it and the model has a lovely face. There seems to be some diffusion going on though and I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. The effect leaves me more wondering if you had a fingerprint on your lens, so that part of the image isn't working for me. I'd also think about reshooting it with the camera-to-model perspective slightly lower (about lip level would be interesting).

At any rate, gorgeous eyes on your model and a solid effort.

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Looks like you might have some sensor dust. I see at least 3 spots on the face that have that look to them. Also, are her eyes really that color. There almost seems to be a purple cast to them?



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Re: New picture for critique
Old 01-13-2006, 12:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I'm not digging the color cast, did you white balance?
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