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Models first shoot, and critiques for me
Old 01-08-2006, 10:05 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This was this models first photo shoot, so go light on her but give me your thoughts on these shots.
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Old 01-08-2006, 01:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The first one is the best. The rest of them need a little levels adjustment. Beautiful model
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#1 is very nice, and I like #3 except the pose. 2&4 need some more contrast. Good work, though.
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Old 01-08-2006, 02:13 PM   #4 (permalink)
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You must be kidding, she is a natural. #2 is my fav pose but lacks contrast which is no big deal (cs2). you have a winner here work with her as much as possible. Good job
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Re: Models first shoot, and critiques for me
Old 01-09-2006, 12:28 AM   #5 (permalink)
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#1 I did some work on, the others are just quick pulls from the raw and a fast conversion to bw

She is lovely, she of doesn't think so, and is very self consience. I'm going to talk to her this week and see if we can schedule another shoot.

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Except the pose
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So I guess you like the tone, bw conversion. As for the pose, could it be improved, a body roll, or piece movement, or is just bad and beyond improvement?

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She was very nervous, but then opened up and relaxed some. I hope to shoot her again if not this month in march.

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