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Old 01-06-2006, 03:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Constructive critiques welcome.
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Re: New PIC for critique
Old 01-06-2006, 10:20 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I not the expert, but I think the lighting looks harsh. The hightlights on her forhead, nose, right arm, and under her left eye seem overexposed.(it could be my monitor, open it in ps and if your over 255 your wrong). The pose also seems a bit harsh with her right arm vanishing and the angles of her shoulders. Her outfit seems to call for something softer. Opinions are like [censored], this is just mine.Nothing personal!
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Re: New PIC for critique
Old 01-08-2006, 12:15 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Well I hope you consider these constructive! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

1. The cropping jams her against the left side of the frame. It makes her look like she's about to leave the frame.
2. The background is busy with a door or window and a metal thing or whatever and that is distracting. There is also a wall socket or black plug down near the bottom on the left that distracts.
3. As already noted the lighting seems a bit harsh. The shadow behind her is thus quite hard. It would have been better to have softer lighting.
4. Outfit seems to be a bit folded in front. I think it needed to be straightened out a bit.

Overall, I would say to pay more attention to details in the shot and basic posing to get the most out of a lovely model.



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Re: New PIC for critique
Old 01-09-2006, 11:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I agree about the arm disappearing and the light seems harsh. you have hard shadow lines. The model is great and so is her wardrobe. if you tone it down in PS and saturate the colors a bit so the blue can Pop. this can work ;-)
Here's your photo after a little touch up PS, Also removed panty line/distracting.....
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Re: New PIC for critique
Old 01-09-2006, 07:16 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the "high-key" effect attained with the lighting. You have maintained a decent amount of detail in the clothing and facial features to make this an okay photograph. I suggest keeping the high-key lighting and the shadows (I do not think they are too harsh in this photo), but definitely lose the clutter in the background (cabinet doors, electrical outlet on the wall, lines of the countertop). You might also try adding a little softfocus effect in PS or PSP to the overall image to add to the "glamour" aspect of the image and see what you think.
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Old 01-10-2006, 10:24 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I luv this image!
It's not really a big deal, but perhaps if you couldn't see the models undies...they seem to not 'go' with the image - but that's just my opinion.

Great work!
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