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Old 01-03-2006, 08:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Tell me what i could of done better for this Pic. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]
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Old 01-03-2006, 09:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks like you could've moved to the rt a bit to remove the ugly door on the rt.

I always try to remember to watch the BG.

I've shot some where the bride was nealing down next to the youngin's, that
lets you crop in closer.

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JMO,
Watch your BG, those windows killed you here. I agree with Joe as the the kneeling pose. Also if it was possible, you need to step back so as not to cut off part of the little boy there.
Many times at a wedding I'll frame more than needed then I'll crop accordingly.
But your biggest problem on this particular shot was the background as mentioned.

Frank,
Sorry I don't have a shot on-line here for this.
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I think perhaps if the subjects were centered more, it would def. enhance the image a great deal.
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