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Old 12-29-2005, 04:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Would love to get some feed back on this image. Was shot in low light at 1600 speed. I was going for a grain look.

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Re: shy model
Old 12-29-2005, 05:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The hand is blown and the stomach area is blown some so grain does not really work well for you, IMO. The crop does not work for me. If your concept was as you say 'shy model' then a tighter crop where it is not insinuated that she has no drawers on would be better. If she was shy yes she might clutch her hand in the breast area but she would not be pantiless, at least I don't think so. Thanks for sharing this one made me think some.



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Old 12-29-2005, 06:21 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i gotta go with mike with his observation that the model being without panties doesn't say "shy." "sly" maybe, but not "shy."
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Re: shy model
Old 12-30-2005, 12:42 AM   #4 (permalink)
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My bad here. In shy model I guess I was meaning the the model "my wife" is not comfortable with her face being shown in the picture. thank for the comments and you are right she is more sly then shy. As for the grain in the shot would more be to much or should I steer away from that idea??

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Old 12-30-2005, 11:19 AM   #5 (permalink)
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OK I went back and looked at it again, and played with the crop and the exposere. Just need to now if I am going in the right direction here. Thanks

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Old 01-02-2006, 02:15 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I like the new cropping, but I am not crazy with her hand looking a little like a claw. JMO.
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I like the concept, but the hand looks awkward
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Old 01-05-2006, 07:24 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Nice crop for a "shy" model not wanting her face in the photo--you cropped without losing any of the photo's interest. Wow! That photo was shot at 1600 and in low light . . . it looks a little washed out . . . and at that speed and low light your options become a little limited. Since you are going for a "grainy" look try a little tweek on PS. Darken the image and add a little grain via PS filters. I think the grain will make for an interesting variation of the image. (And will further mask your wife's identity.) Try it and see what you think.
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