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Kyrin - 50\'s Lingerie
Old 12-28-2005, 06:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I had the pleasure of shooting with Kyrin today (MM #34645). Here's one from the set we did with natural light and some 50's lingerie. This is my first shoot using my new Canon 70-200 f/2.8L. My goal in the new year is to improve my image quality immensely. Good start?

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Re: Kyrin - 50\'s Lingerie
Old 12-28-2005, 06:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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alright dangit!! to the back of the boat!!!!!
I love this!!!!! Hey wonder what it would look like in black and white??
Nice Work!!!!!


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Old 12-28-2005, 07:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I love it!
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Re: Kyrin - 50\'s Lingerie
Old 12-28-2005, 10:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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First I cannot get used to your new name, but when the feds are out to get you I understand you have to take measures.

There is a point in time when I quit saying 'hey very nice, that's good you might change this and that' and when I believe you were really close and I need to smack you a little. Not that I am in to violence but when I was on the edge some big boys who no longer frequent this site smacked me.

So let's look. The overall center of the image is the lingerie. It takes up most of the visual space, it is the best lit and it is just plain dominant. Cool, but the jewelry is in no way 50's and the haircut is also not. Now don't get me wrong, the image is very good but when you get that close to recreating something I just wonder why you did not fully recreate something. Because of your slightly lower angle and the way you have cropped her left arm and hidden her hand behind her hair her left arm looks overly small in comparison, in fact the angles make her arm look almost child size. By the way her make-up and hair are late 60's and actually very British.

All this said I like the image and the feeling it creates but in my mind you were on the edge of something much greater. But that's just my opinion.



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Re: Kyrin - 50\'s Lingerie
Old 12-28-2005, 10:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Damn..I still have a long way to go developing an eye for detail!!

 
 
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Old 12-29-2005, 08:19 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks for taking the time to post a reply.
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Re: Kyrin - 50\'s Lingerie
Old 12-29-2005, 08:21 AM   #7 (permalink)
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alright dangit!! to the back of the boat!!!!!
I love this!!!!! Hey wonder what it would look like in black and white??
Nice Work!!!!!

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Thanks Don. I'm going back to my perch on the stern now. I just needed to put a little more coal in the boiler to keep up [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Re: Kyrin - 50\'s Lingerie
Old 12-29-2005, 08:29 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks for the feedback Mike. I really appreciate your insight.

I probably should not have tagged the image as being 50's lingerie. I certainly agree with you that the other elements break that spell. The only thin 50's really is the lingerie. I have noted that a poorly labeled image can detract just as much as poor image quality - I'm not very good at it. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

That being said, I think you have hit on one of my weaknesses. I am getting much better at capturing an image, but I still am not very good at producing an image. I tend to take a hodge-podge of what is available and seldom take the time to produce an overall image. I'm at a stage where I am shooting what looks cool to me. It's going to take practice to get better at this part. I wonder if I have the patience for it.

As a note, her hair is really a bright red color and this black wig was the only thing available. I wonder now if the bright red hair might have been an interesting juxtaposition of the two different cultures.

BTW- Once I find the one-armed man, I can go back to using the other name.

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Re: Kyrin - 50\'s Lingerie
Old 12-29-2005, 08:30 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Oh, wait. I forgot to satisfy your curiosity...

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Old 12-29-2005, 02:50 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Oh I dont know Rosh, Your title said 50's Lingerie. Now if you said 50's pin-up or 50's portrait style then I could see the problem. As for Lingerie, yes it's 50's style. I suppose if you were to read more into the title then you could get lost. But I think it was tagged just fine. My thought of the photo though which was pointed out to me last night by another photog was her arm on the window, Bit contorted? Sort of dwarfing it? What do you think?.
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